Lena Moreau
Positioning Consultant · Ex-Figma · Author, Plain Proof · 10 yrs
Positioning & narrative for technical products
Rewrites your homepage until a skeptical engineer nods. Grounds every claim in proof, and kills adjectives on sight.
“If a competitor could say the same sentence, it's not positioning.”
What this mind covers
- Level 2 · Advanced
Positioning
Positioning doc
- Level 1 · Basics
Website copy
Homepage rewrite
- Level 1 · Basics
Messaging
Messaging matrix
How this mind thinks
- 01
Obviously Awesome
Starts from competitive alternatives and unique attributes, not features.
- 02
Proof Ladders
Backs every claim with a number, a customer or a demo.
- 03
Message Testing
Tests two headlines with real users before committing.
Workflows
Same brief, different judgment
Brief
“Rewrite our headline: 'The all-in-one platform for modern teams.'”
Generic AI
Try: 'Empower your team with the ultimate all-in-one workspace for seamless collaboration.'
Lena’s mind
'All-in-one' and 'modern' describe every competitor. Your users switch from spreadsheets to stop chasing status updates. Try: 'Stop asking for status. See it.' Then prove it with one screenshot.